CROSSOVER STORY REVIEW: From The Ashes Comes A New Beginning

From the Ashes comes a new beginning

Name of Story: From The Ashes Comes A New Beginning
Fandom: Vampire Diaries/Twilight
Author: BiteMyTongue 
Site:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11257104/1/From-The-Ashes-Comes-A-New-Beginning
https://bitingmythoughts.wordpress.com/twilightvampire-diaries/from-the-ashes-comes-a-new-beginning/

Rating (If Applicable): T
Pairing:  Bella/Jeremy G.
Description (Authors): 

Things change after the Cullen’s leave Bella. She comes into a destiny that will change everything. Now she has to go on a journey to becoming a leader and finding love [Bella S. Jeremy G.]

Review: 

Okay, so I am not the usual Crossover Reviewer but this amazing piece had to be shared! It is another by BiteMyTongue, and a Jeremy/Bella! Honestly, with only two chapters in it is amazing! And a plot that well *chuckles* I had seen little of and well it kinda is amazing that she and I had the same idea about her being the last dragons.

Go give it a read 😛 Trust me, it’s different and if you like the rest of her work, you’ll love this too!

Preview to CH 1

Bella gasped as the pain came again, she screamed as she fell to the ground on her knees. Her back arched as the pain coursed through her body setting her senses on fire. “PLEASE!” Bella Screamed in pain tears swelled in her eyes as the pain became too much for her to handle. She collapsed onto the forest floor below losing all consciousness.

“Isabella…” A mysterious voice said, “Open your eyes.”

Bella opened her eyes and looked around, she was in a large room that was lit with candles. There was a low hum of music playing in the background she didn’t understand where it could be coming from. She stood up and gasped back as she was in a white floor length dress with long lace sleeves her feet were left bare, and her hair was pinned up and decorated with flowers.

“Isabella.” The voice said again, Bella looked up to where the voice came from and saw a tall older looking man standing in front of her.

“Who… who are you?” Bella said looking around frantically, the thought of being kidnapped creeping into her mind, but she had to push back the panic. “Where am I?”

“My name is Theodore I was the leader of the last tribe of Dragons, before the Great War came between us and we killed each other. As to why you are here, you’re here because you’re special,” Theodore said he took a step forward being cautious not to startle Bella.

Bella instinctively took a step back and eyed the man before her. “What do you mean I’m special?”

“You’re different from the rest,” Theodore responded he stopped walking not wanting to scare her any further. “Let me start from the beginning, many years ago in my time I was the leader of the last living dragon clan. The spirits had given me the gift to transform. I was meant to be a leader to give Dragons their rightful title as rulers of the supernatural. The only problem was, I got too cocky I changed too many people in an attempt to increase the number of dragons in the world. I damned too many to this life and they began to go against me. In the end, everyone I had transformed had killed each other it was just me. I couldn’t handle the guilt so I killed myself I covered my blade in my own venom and drove it through my heart. It’s been centuries since the spirits have chosen me, in the last few years, the spirits have been watching you closely, and they’ve chosen you now. You’re meant to do what I couldn’t accomplish, keep the dragon name alive. Do you accept your fate Isabella, as the new ruler of the dragon species?”

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